Thursday, January 12, 2012

PLEASE give this poem a chance!?

This is very, very good!! I really like it. My only criticism is that the fifth stanza seems a little off some how. I'm not sure what it is, but it just doesn't flow. Keep up the good work :)
Posted by Cody Skates at 7:08 AM

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